Chasing time and time again

Discussion in 'Writers Forum' started by Autentique, Jan 4, 2007.

  1. Autentique

    Autentique wonderfabulastic

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    Then we forget how we got here in the first place. Ignoring the obvious becomes a habit and we see everything except what's there. Things fluctuate faster than what I can grasp, up becomes down, down becomes right. It becomes hard to keep track and when you are not here and there might as well be anywhere.
    Anywhere, my new found land, the one I share with you my faceless stranger, nothing but a voice and a hand. There's no need for more, get me drunk of sweet words, soft touches, soft words, sweet touches, it all plays along.
    I would scream your name if I knew it, I would give you mine if I had one, but everything has been consumed. My smile is what remains, waiting to be stolen. We do not know, we don't and the best times we had are the ones where we did nothing at all and the most memorable ones are the ones when we did our worst.
    Time seems to know where it's going so I follow from this chair. This room is a desert, nothing but heat and thirst have no windows here baby, no way to escape. The walls only reflect darkness and I'm listening to the sounds of hell and I feel you my faceless stranger, I feel you so far away.
    Outside some dream of confetti while my eyes just beg you to come. Time keeps stabbing me in the back and the wound just grows while outside some dream of fairy dust. Here I wait, for that that never comes, just leave me my faceless stranger in the arms of a wolf, leave me there, let him feed of my throat.
    Is the final click. Time, I finally caught up with it.
     
  2. mastermemei

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    I like the opening lines, its true that sometimes life gets too busy that we ignore the small things, that are more important than our perceived bigger and more important things


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  3. mellowthyme

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    An insightfullness beyond the years that suggest you!!!!

    'Even a stopped clock tells the right time twice a day'
     

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