I don't really consider myself a songwriter but i've writen a few songs. here's one that worked really wel with my band. and i wonder what you all think of it? (maybe this should be in the poetry or music section i don't know...) I call it In love with a star they all think i'm a fool even way back in highschool they said i need love and they where not that far off. I look up at night night just to see her again She 's shining so bright i must be dreamin all day i wonder is she still there coase she older then i am older then any man She's the star in the night sky Shining way up high And i know she will be there till the day that i die How long did she travel just to be with me our love will unravel We have a promise to keep one day she extinush but i don't mind couse we'll be together beyond space and beyond time ]Solo[ She's the star in the night sky Shining way up high And i know she will be there till the day that i die How long did she travel just to be with me our love will unravel We have a promise to keep one day she extinguish but i don't mind 'couse we'll be together beyond space and beyond time
lol that was funny!!! "you must be high on something!" reply "yeah" haha funny. I kinda like it. I would work a little bit longer on that piece of work, there's something missin'!
hey love!... another good one... this ones a little more catchy...I like it... not too depressing...and people can relate to it cause every ones had a crush on a celebrity that they'll never meet... two thumbs up!
haha, well that's one way of interpreting this Sure it could be about Angelina Jolie, but it's actually really about a Star in the night sky. & are kinda about the fact that the stars we see today are billions of years old, and billions of light years away. and thus have been traveling as long for us to see. but hey, the best songs are the ones where the listener decide what its about, so ill take that as compliment:H thanks for commenting love!
What a shame that this topic had been looked at about 186 times and only 4 people were kind enough to say a few words about it. Maybe its due to that fact the i haven't really said anything about what the others write, some kind of karma? i dunno, you tell me...if you feel like it...
