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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by mrsmorrison27, Jan 25, 2007.

  1. mrsmorrison27

    mrsmorrison27 yoda piss

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    We dance.
    Like ghosts caught on camera.
    Fragile minds lead me astray.
    Prance around headstones of white.
    Some sad song in a forest of dreams.
    A mystery caught in a music box, fills me with fear.
    Strange noise in the attic, precious night light guide me to sleep.
    Childlike fears return in our absence of innocense.
    You don't sing me a lullebye, like you used to.
    I feel like Alice never made it out of Wonderland,
    and I'm still in the Queen's court.
    Whirling, swirling music from a small musicbox, ballerina mechanics.
    Are we childhood's nightmare?
    a frightening image, a scream outside her window.
    Treat us well, faithful fairytale, bring us sweet dreams and melodys of yellow.
    Bring us childhood nightmares, in a music box song.
     
  2. Sunburst

    Sunburst Fairy

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    That was beautiful :) I really love your style, and how the periods at the end of each sentence give it a sense of finality and firmness. The mood is sort of eerie, yet serene. I loved it!
     
  3. mrsmorrison27

    mrsmorrison27 yoda piss

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    thank you so much =]
     
  4. KyndVeggie4Peace

    KyndVeggie4Peace -[ in.bloom ]-

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    Wow, Haley ...

    You have grown soo much artistically since I first met you here on the forums. That is quite possibly one of the best poems I have read on here in a while. Congratulations! :D

    Keep up the good work.
     
  5. mrsmorrison27

    mrsmorrison27 yoda piss

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    aww thank you Josh my darlin'.

    i do try to grow as much as I possibly can, artistically
     
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