Girl of Despair

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by stonedimmaculate, Jan 29, 2007.

  1. stonedimmaculate

    stonedimmaculate Member

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    Staring vacantly through dim eyes,

    Living through a cold despair,

    No one hears her internal cries,

    Does anyone even care?



    Crisp is her smile,

    Crunching under passers’ feet,

    Simply an innocent child,

    No one knows how deep



    Release is a razor blade,

    Radiant upon her bed,

    So brave, but quite afraid,

    Of these scars that show she’s bled



    Keeping closed her little world,

    Letting no one in,

    In need of nothing money can afford,

    Only the words of a friend



    Her heart so heavy,

    With love for all but herself,

    Her tears break her eye’s levee,

    Praying for the people on her shelf



    No one knows what’s swirling,

    In that mind she has,

    While other girls are twirling,

    On the playful grass



    For this girl I ponder,

    Think with all my might,

    For this girl I wonder,

    Will she be alright?
     
  2. DelxPez

    DelxPez Member

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    nice, i like it!
     
  3. 20th_centry_fox

    20th_centry_fox Member

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    One of the best poems I've seen in a while. keep up the good work :spliff:
     
  4. TheLizardKingMike

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    Awesome man, that was very good. It seems pretty complete, which is hard for me to do sometimes. Take it easy.
     

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