Closer

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by tink, Feb 13, 2007.

  1. tink

    tink Member

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    Her cheeks blush

    His lips draw near

    Their breath mingles

    Hands reach to grab

    To pull closer

    Closer to being one

    Love swells

    And souls collide

    Remember forever

    You are mine

     
  2. Flowers In My Hair

    Flowers In My Hair Spontaneous Joy

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    Did you write this for your Valentine? It's beautiful. :)
     
  3. DelxPez

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    I agree with my friend Flowers In My Hair, it's beautiful...
     
  4. tink

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    thank you. No I didn't write this for valentines day it but it fits nicley with the holiday
     
  5. indian~summer

    indian~summer yo ho & a bottle of yum

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    very lovely :)
     
  6. Sirius

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    very sexual but also sweet, i liked it alot
     
  7. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    :)

    thank you ~~*
     

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