Autumn

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by 20th_centry_fox, Feb 12, 2007.

  1. 20th_centry_fox

    20th_centry_fox Member

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    Her body lies by the street
    Her tears cry as I comfort her, please don't weep
    Her pain and her voice seems rough and cracked
    And I wait, for Autumn
    A month they say she will come back
    But her pain will never heal
    She doesnt forget the stuff in the past
    And I wait, for Aututmn
    When warm wind comes
    I will wait for her usual guitar strums
    And I'll wait, for Autumn

    Her body is healing
    She says she never experienced this feeling
    But she seems so sad and lonely
    I promise her, the last thing I'll do
    Is wait for Autumn
    She sits in the corner
    And plays her gutiar
    Lonely and waits for me
    But I never come
    Because I wait for Autumn.

    Please tell me what you think.
     
  2. DelxPez

    DelxPez Member

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    Very good. I like it a lot.
    I like your style.
    Keep up the good work :)
     
  3. 20th_centry_fox

    20th_centry_fox Member

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    Thank you so much!:)
     
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