Get that penis out of your mouth How's that dick taste? You're a disgrace This isn't your life, you've been displaced Liar, biter That's what discribes ya Your faker than a transvestites vagina You're quick to grab on the next mans nuttsack And you wont loosen your grip, give them nutts back You see it on TV and you do the movements You hear it on the radio and you have to do it You say what they say and you dress how they dress Let me guess You're a puppet, a marionette You're quick to jump on the next trend and thats that You're quick to grab on the next man's nuttsack You're all biters You bite all your guises But I see through disguises You're all dick riders
I didn't like it, personally i found the content lame, but your views were clearly expressed. Perhaps your expressions will awaken, yet it seems more a breaking down leaving the reader to rebuild if possible.
I think it is clear that the writer has been hurt by a cheating woman, who was hiding behind the excuse "Everybody's doing it". I felt the pain of the author. It is different, but it felt real.
haha that sucks so incredibly bad, its like a 13 year old wrote it plus, tranvestites only dress like women, transexuals have the organs created
this, coming from a person named nuthugger. thanks for nothing bro. I respect all oppinions but, don't be a dickhead with no constructive criticism.
I should probably mind my own business, but you should only attack the material, not the poster. If you want to degrade him, please do it through private messages. I don't think others want to see any more of your immature out breaks.
whatever, the poem is about as immature as it gets. I figure anyone who posts it deserves some shit. Find something better to defend
I don't mind people shitting on my work. Doesn't bother me I just don't like comments directed at me, like they know me. "Your work sucks and is a piece of shit" is one thing but, telling me to get that cock outta my mouth is another. By the way this isn't about what it looks like, it's about wannabe posers.
