2 stages of a confused poet.......love is so simple now

-bodhisattva-

My eyes fall slow
Like the trails of rain
That falls on my window
My love is in vain
Your movements like silk
And your heartache like rhyme
My confusion consumption
Grows larger with time
I don't understand
How you don't understand
How I think that you love me
When you lend me your hand
I used to help you
Now you need to help me
To re-open my eyes
And teach me to see

-Lillie Of My I.....-

It's much too late to feel like them
Were flowers, they are clones
We dance to music to feed our souls
And warm our laughing bones
Empowered by the moonlight
The captain plays a tune
Hand in hand we walk alone
Beneath the hazy moon
The water skates on down the stream
To slip and meet the sea
I feel as If im on the clouds
Just trying to get free
And then you came and saved me
And you didn't even try
You crept up on my wildest dreams
And stole them from my eye
I love you and I thank you
You are forever mine
Just knowing that you wake each morn'
Will keep me going fine

-snicker surprise-

A two soul eclipse
A blinding of light
Train whistle's blow
To welcome the night
A shadowy blanket
Engulfing the sky
The suns just existing
Not wondering why
The clouds are all toxic
For the future arrived
Mother earth is dying
But the man has survived
The daytime is scary
The moon flees in fear
But life is like candles
Its all cocaine clear

-you can tell by the way she smiled-

Every single breath you take
Is one closer to none
So why then do we breathe apart
When we would breathe as one?
And know that I will stick around
No matter, win or lose
Because even Mona Lisa had a bad day
And a case of the highway blues
The Northern Lights call out our names
To come and watch the glow
To come and dance away our blues
To find a friend in foe

-springtime blues-

I picked you a flower my darling
On my lonely midnight wing
For new life received from my wilted lady fair
New hope a sign of spring
Well walk down a road in the midnight sun
And see the moons face of flame
A breath of fresh air your the wind in my hair
Such a feeling bares no name
My feet are swift and graceful as I dance with starlit eyes
You're a shooting star in angel form
Your candle never dies
Were patient like birds in need of flight
We keep our hands as one
Our shadows on the moon as we fly by night
Towards the morning sun

-empty my head-

You said you would die for me
Now I wish you would
You played every nerve in my system
You've worn out your welcome in my heart
Something in me has faded
Something in you has faded too
Im not glad for what we had
Im not glad for what you are
I was in a hell not aware of my surroundings
You are my nemesis now
Somewhere you are nothing to a nobody
And I hope you enjoyed all those times
I hope you realized what you will never have again
I hope you realize by now that it's a loss on your side
And like all stars, you have your glory now
But you will burn out, you will end up lost
Lost within yourself, until you are nothing
You are nothing to me. . . .



enjoy kids..... :X :&

 

-bodhisattva-

My eyes fall slow
Like the trails of rain
That falls on my window
My love is in vain
Your movements like silk
And your heartache like rhyme
My confusion consumption
Grows larger with time
I don't understand
How you don't understand
How I think that you love me
When you lend me your hand
I used to help you
Now you need to help me
To re-open my eyes
And teach me to see

Beautiful. Love the soft awakening flow.

 

thank you man..

dude i wanna hear some advice about these poems
good or bad.....

meow?

 

Someone called?

I trully liked. -you can tell by the way she smiled-

At first I wasn't too sure about the title, sounded too familiar...but it was a pleasant surprise.

I thought this was excellent. Great flow that contains a great meaning!

 

from "-springtime blues-"

"I picked you a flower my darling
On my lonely midnight wing
For new life received from my wilted lady fair
New hope a sign of spring
Well walk down a road in the midnight sun
And see the moons face of flame
A breath of fresh air..."

romantic and refreshing

 

i believe that, throughout life you will encounter many poets, but to each poet you will find a sentence, a moment, however fleeting it may be,in which you will be taken aghast ... a space in which you may stop and reside to ponder the great thoughts you have just encountered.



i truely think that with you will make this true for many people as you made it true for me with these thoughts:


"Every single breath you take
Is one closer to none
So why then do we breathe apart
When we would breathe as one? "

 

thank you very much

 

capitan trips (jerry)

An inspiration I've never felt
From a figure of the past
And though Ive never met you
Your life went by too fast
You started in the days of love
And lasted till' the storm
To think you were a normal kid
Until you took an idol form
You spoke to me with your guitar
You woke my inner soul
You helped me dance the hours away
You let the good times roll
So thank you for the high times
And for showing me the light
Rest in peace, and follow it
I do bid you goodnight




just something small i wrote for jerry garcia day