thinking

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by dragonangelbiker, Feb 20, 2007.

  1. dragonangelbiker

    dragonangelbiker Member

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    sitting here thinking
    a really bad habit
    wishing to be drinking
    dont be scared of the bunny rabbit
    staring off to nothing
    trying to think of something
    listening to the sound of anything
    the bunnys getting frightening
    going and going
    never stop dreaming
    nobodies coming
    the motherships beaming
    a spaceship full of rabbits
    the motherships arrived
    thinkings a bad habit
    makes you wanna go and hide
     
  2. Malapascua

    Malapascua Member

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    You aren't afraid of bunnies are you?
    This is cute.
    I love it.
     
  3. dragonangelbiker

    dragonangelbiker Member

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    no im not afraid of bunnies.i was just really really really out of it and havin some twisted thoughts when i wrote it.glad you like it.
     
  4. guinea

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    it is really a unique gift to be able to trap a moment in time with words that you write. i often go back thru my writing from over the years and notice how my moods and perceptions and emotions change within myself. i often find myself pounding myself in thought and I get lost. i like the line "never stop dreaming" that is one of the only times that i get really worried about my inner peace is when i don't dream for many consecutive days in a row. any way i really got into the poem. keep writing
     
  5. yyyesiam2

    yyyesiam2 Senior Member

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    i liked it. i'm guesing you've seen donnie darko also. if not, watch it man.
     
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