lovin in the mountains

kissing me,hugging me,holding me dear

feeling the warmth of the clear mountain air

wanting you,holding you,hold me my dear

the beauty is the way that you care

smelling the flowers,the smell of the air

the look of the mountains
throws out any cares
just kiss me,caress me
show me your love
embrace me,entice me
as the stars shine above
draw me in with your passion
draw me in with your love
thrill me with ecstacy
in the mountains above

 

Gotta love experiencing nature, in the great out doors.
Nice work dab.

 

the mountains are so serene, it is a refreshing look on how nature can be so soothing, you have an incrdible way with words, i love reading your poetry, please don't stop.

peac love joy harmony

 

that was very beautiful.
excellent job =]

 

this would make an excellent song

 

Good job! It really spoke to me.

Peace and love

 

It made me feel like a wildman . I love makin love in the mountains.

 

i like it!

 

I liked the simplicity of the construction of your poem, how it conveyed such powerful emotions using the simplicity.

Fabulous.

Xowie
xxx