fly away

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by las puertas, Feb 28, 2007.

  1. las puertas

    las puertas Member

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    we see each other no longer
    seperate people on different paths for us to wander
    that fire in my eyes has burned out
    what once sparked our beinging has lead to our ending
    i wanted to be yours 4ever but you didnt let me
    we pass each other moving on to our different journeys that behold us
    i guess i knew all along we would be apart cause i never truly was the 1 in your heart
     
  2. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Very sad and pretty. I can totally relate to what you are saying!

    Peace and love
     
  3. Malapascua

    Malapascua Member

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    Very nice, tender, and painful.
     
  4. dragonangelbiker

    dragonangelbiker Member

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    very well put, sounds painful. keep on writing
     
  5. hopefaithlove

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    ur a good writer
     
  6. las puertas

    las puertas Member

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    thanks 4 your comments!
     

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