more madness

I hope raining reds
won't stain every tent
and give you twinkies

Calming waters
waters drowning
drowning lemons
lemons dying
dying are dreams
dreams that wonder
wonder greenweeds
maybe vanish

Its cruising sunshine
on latin pillars
to an open space
create shadows dance

while cool winds whistle
chasing the untied leaves
that were summers glory

a pinch of unknown
that must be sunlight
relieves us from grey

And days sleep away
while changing thoughts
stir dandelions
sending me to green
with shady oak trees
from rock to ballad
sleeping in long grass

 

That sucked.

 

you could of saved your time and said nothing your post was pointless

 

I really enjoyed that piece- great job!!!!

 

I second that.

 

You know - there's no reason to be rude to anyone... if you're goign to be rude- then just don't say antyhing at all

No Love there

 

I'm not being rude, I'm being critical.

If I would choose to be rude, I would say : "This is the worst piece of shit I have ever read."

Yet I didn't.

 

If we said nothing at all he would keep writing this crap and it will keep clogging up my beloved home.
As Rubin wanted to say, "This is the worst piece of shit I've read yet from you."
There, I said it.