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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by BraveSirRubin, Feb 19, 2007.

  1. BraveSirRubin

    BraveSirRubin Members

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    Fuck you Jesus,
    Fuck you Jesus,
    I'm a poet,
    Fuck you Jesus.
    I love Satan,
    Satan loves me,
    Fuck you Jesus,
    Fuck you Jesus.
    The sun cries,
    Over lost moons,
    Fuck you Jesus,
    Fuck you Jesus.
    I will go to
    Eat your children,
    Fuck you Jesus,
    I love Satan,
    Satan loves me,
    Fuck you Jesus.
    Fuck you Jesus,
    Fuck me Jesus,
    Satan loves me,
    Fuck you Jesus.
    Fuck you Jesus,
    Fuck you Jesus,
    Fuck you Jesus.
    I drank a soda,
    Fuck you Jesus,
    The Satan is soda,
    Fuck you Jesus.
    Fuck you Jesus,
    Fuck you Jesus,
    I love Satan,
    Satan loves me,
    Fuck you Jesus,
    Today.


    I applaud my own creativity.
     
  2. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Shalom, there are many smooth and inspiring images, in this poem named 'Life.'
     
  3. teh-horace

    teh-horace for your pleasure

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    hurts my eyes
     
  4. BraveSirRubin

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    Shalom! :)

    Now that I got your attention with probably one of the worst poems on this forum (Hmm...maybe not... at least the poem above has some kind of social manifestation :D)

    Seriously though... I do have some old poems over here:

    http://www.hipforums.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?f=159

    I've never felt comfortable with posting poetry on these forums, I'm slowly publishing all of mine and having some person pass it off as theirs would be no good.
     
  5. indian~summer

    indian~summer yo ho & a bottle of yum

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    cause i love you i must warn you..repent or jesus will come down from heaven and smite you with his sword of fire...
     
  6. BraveSirRubin

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    You can smite someone with a sword?
     
  7. indian~summer

    indian~summer yo ho & a bottle of yum

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    a sword of fire and an army of angels
     
  8. BraveSirRubin

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    I do hope that the angels are not under the command of General Patton.
     
  9. indian~summer

    indian~summer yo ho & a bottle of yum

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    no they're under the command of jesus..read the bible heathen!
     
  10. DQ Veg

    DQ Veg JUSTYNA'S TIGER

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    No, they're under the command of Michael the Archangel (my namesake, btw) who could kick Patton's butt in a split second.
     
  11. BraveSirRubin

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    What if it was Patton and Rommel against the angles?

    ...and like 20 tanks...

    What then? Huh?
     
  12. indian~summer

    indian~summer yo ho & a bottle of yum

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  13. sylvanlightning

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    Nice improv.
     
  14. Hyphy

    Hyphy Duke of Earl

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    Allaahu Akbar
    Ashhadu Allah ilaaha illa-Lah
    Ash Hadu anna Muhamadar rasuulullah
    Hayya' alas Salaah
    Hayya' ala Falaah
     
  15. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    My favorite is the one about the Japanese Master. :)
     
  16. hopefaithlove

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    you say satan loves u.... did he suffer , let himself be beaten for u? no but god did... and u know what is really amazing..... when u just sit there and curse the god who made u..... even then.... he would die again just for you .... why? cuz GOD loves you and HIS love never dies
     
  17. BraveSirRubin

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    God loves me in the ass.
     
  18. hopefaithlove

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    hehehehehehe good cumbak dued
    rock on


     
  19. indian~summer

    indian~summer yo ho & a bottle of yum

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    you truly inspire
    you really do
     
  20. BraveSirRubin

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    I do indeed rock.

    ...and Jess, do I inspire you in any special way? :D

    Merci, those are so old :p
     

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