Her allusive "O"

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Malapascua, Mar 3, 2007.

  1. Malapascua

    Malapascua Member

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    Her allusive "O"

    Her head is so full of worries
    She cannot relax and enjoy
    Her thoughts are like snow flurries
    A clear mind, she should employ

    Stop thinking about the drapes
    Or the color of the walls and ceiling
    Don't worry about the cub scouts
    Or how your mother is feeling

    Don't think about your day at work
    Or the dinner that you made
    Hold on to me and feel my touch
    Don't let the feeling fade

    Think about the bubble bath
    And all your scented oils
    Remove from you head
    Today's troubles and toils

    Try to think romantic thoughts
    Not of us just "banging"
    Cause I'm already on my way
    And I don't want to leave you hanging

    That's better, I can feel you calm
    As the tensions melt away
    Ahhh, there it is, the big release
    She reached her goal today

     
  2. dragonangelbiker

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    very well written. keep writing,my friend
     
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