a poem of mine

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by stonerman420, Mar 9, 2007.

  1. stonerman420

    stonerman420 Member

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    i wrote this after reading alot of ginsberg so here goes:

    All we do in life
    wanting waiting
    willing to accept the enevitable
    threw the subconsious of our being
    remains through all as a shape
    shape figures all around
    false figures shift the ground
    finding there the earth will tell
    for the secret of the universe is
    within these figures
    the figures of you of me of he of she
    this was now and forever
    begrudged by dust


    so what do you guys think? is it just another case of bad poetry or do you like?
     
  2. dragonangelbiker

    dragonangelbiker Member

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  3. imherbert

    imherbert Member

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    It's jazz.
     

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