Two Poems - Lost love in California

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by DancerAnnie, Mar 10, 2007.

  1. DancerAnnie

    DancerAnnie Resident Beach Bum

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    I wrote these two poems after being on a poetry hiatus for about a year and a half. I just hadn't been inspired...but I feel like pain can be a good muse...
    Enjoy.

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    A bird – you
    Flying high
    Seeing the world for what it is
    And is not
    Free
    To see, to think, to feel
    Spreading your wings
    Feeling the air beneath them
    I caught it – you
    For a moment
    A blink
    I caressed – you, your spirit
    A comfort
    A sigh, a breath.


    Then – a noise
    You must go
    I feel it – you squirm, wriggle
    As I hold you in my hands
    Your eyes scream at me
    To let go
    “No.
    Don’t go
    You are safe – here”
    I hold tighter
    You panic – eyes darting
    I squeeze – frightened
    I can’t – let go
    No.


    My hands tire
    Your eyes – frighten me
    I blink,
    A tear
    Fingers separate – unravel
    That moment
    You fly again
    I’m left
    Here
    To remember that breath
    That moment
    And hope
    I feel it again.




    Thoughts of Ventura


    The sea sighs
    As the sun sets
    Vivid oranges atop a horizon
    A thin line separating air and water
    Colors changing at every blink
    A myriad of photons floating and dancing
    A painting in the sky – just for us.


    I feel the crisp air on my face
    Gazing out at the nothingness
    I close my eyes to imagine
    Mother Nature’s breath enveloping me
    Her hand brushing the hair from my face
    The gentle breeze pirouetting across my skin
    The earth exhaling - for us.


    Waves tumble to the shore
    Curling like a smile on lovers’ lips
    Crackling as it meets the sand.
    A bird is playing among these bubbles
    A game of catch-me-if-you-can
    Before it is chased away to another place
    And the waves reach out – to us


    Your hand slips around my waist pulling me near
    I feel your warm breath on my neck
    I am awestruck by the scene before us
    A tear slips down my cheek as you grab my hand
    The beauty of this overtakes me
    My breath shallows as we walk away
    Knowing it is the end of today – and of us.
     
  2. Bcook

    Bcook Member

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    Very nice, I enjoyed it if nothing else.
     
  3. gratefulvegan

    gratefulvegan Member

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    Those are two very good poems.
     
  4. imherbert

    imherbert Member

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    beautifully tragic.
     
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