He's Gone (A poem I wrote)

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by gratefulvegan, Mar 11, 2007.

  1. gratefulvegan

    gratefulvegan Member

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    He's Gone

    -Jim R.

    She kneels beside me, clasping my hand
    My trembling fingers rest within her warm palm
    Her eyes gaze desperately into mine
    She speaks about such trivial things
    Her lights left on, her house unlocked
    Then glances at her golden watch
    Cars sail by outside my window, sirens scream
    High heels step across linoleum floors

    Darkness pours into the stifling room
    A thickening mist envelops us both
    With a blink it dissipates, then forms again
    A tear rolls down her cheek
    Sliding through faint lines that press into her skin
    She pats her face dry, removing a layer of makeup
    Underneath the powder lies pallid skin
    She sighs solemnly, returns her attention to me

    The darkness has now filled the entire room
    She leaves to fill her empty glass
    A nurse places a blanket at my feet, then walks away
    My eyelids are pulled closed with a certain finality
    A droning tone echoes through the room
    The door is flung open, she enters again
    She kneels beside my bed, assuming her former position
    She grasps my hand with an urgent pull.



    …“He's gone."
     
  2. RiversClearwater

    RiversClearwater Member

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    very well done mate, excellent twist
     
  3. gratefulvegan

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    thanks- i this was sorta a stream-of-consciousness thing...

    peace
     
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