New crazy Poem... this was wirtten on a limb

listening to The Beatles on XM- got an idea spawned off Ticket To Ride

My baby doesn't care when he rides the grey elephant down. he has a ticket tot he show in the town over which is here with me. riding down to greet him at the end of my dusty road, the scuffs of my feet blow up pain in the face of the oncoming car. wrecks havoc on the world then suddenly it rains and life is normal. there is my love walking on here elephant with 5 tusks, no 4. hwo to explaint he sadness i feel to have to give upmy only lviing organ to this beautiful creature- but the priestess agrees to the idea and says hello to the day and the moon comes up. i cry out in my dream while i am awake, back in my small cave of love. will you come in my cave with me?

 

dam i realy liked this one too, useally(sorry bad speller) i see i gd pice i like the then next one the writer does is a bit off but i felt this was realy stong aswell.the elephant idea is gennis loved it n ticket to ride is such a great song aswell

 

oo n the cave of love thing was realy cool at the ending much love