Digging

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by imherbert, Mar 16, 2007.

  1. imherbert

    imherbert Member

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    Shall we walk along digging all that we see?
    And meet the Mayan temples and god's of the American street.
    Shall we be the we that we want on anything that we want?
    I'm digging you and you are digging me
    isn't that the way?
    Isn't that the god?
    Connection through epiphany's eyes.

    Who gives a shit about the A's B's and C's.
    Lets journey through our souls for a moment and cleanse our minds.
    A cathartic rage of infectious love and hate and imagination.
    Ride with me, people of the word.
    Let the us that we are flow to the next line
    and beyond.

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    Shovel the dirt
    Find the word,
    the right one.
    the one that says
    eternity
    love
    hate
    lust
    beauty
    air
    soup

    Where are the words
    in this hole,
    this grave?

    Come.
    Have I not earned your trust?
     
  2. Duck

    Duck quack. Lifetime Supporter

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    I absolutely love the style of this one
    it has a very original feel to it
    so honest

    that 'Shall we be...' line kinda caught me up at first though :tongue:
     

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