Love lost

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by hippie_chick666, Feb 25, 2007.

  1. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Dark clouds fill the sky,
    rain and sleet pour down
    in heavy sheets,
    leaving not a soul unsoaked.

    The wind whips through
    the evergreen trees,
    as birds and squirrels try
    to find their way back home.

    It was on this miserable day
    that I ended it with the
    one that I loved.
    Tears poured down like the rain.
    A love lost, evermore.

    Peace and love
     
  2. AlawlessLulu69420

    AlawlessLulu69420 Member

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    wow that one is really different. i like it
     
  3. guinea

    guinea Member

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    sometimes in life you must set a bird free, if it returns then you know it was meant to be, however if it does not then it was for the better anyway.
     
  4. hippy i am

    hippy i am poppy seed bagels

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    sometimes it has to rain
    for you to see what you've lost.
     
  5. dragonangelbiker

    dragonangelbiker Member

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    love your way with words. keep on writing
     
  6. OleFlowerMan

    OleFlowerMan Member

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    How does that work young goddess ?
     
  7. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    hi just found this of yours and....
    echo of a lovers' pain.
    it washes away over time ,when
    the rays will allow its warmth to enter
    whole.....
    lovenpeace saff....
     
  8. hippy i am

    hippy i am poppy seed bagels

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    bc when the clouds/rain come down
    it rains and there's the possibility of things washing away.
    when the rain and clouds clear, you see what you've got.
    and you also learn of the things that you've lost.

    where do you get "young goddess" from?
    just wondering.
     
  9. imherbert

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    Like it much. I can definitely relate.
     

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