away...for what

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by saffronfrancisburnet, Mar 14, 2007.

  1. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    to all. not been here awhile,been finding peace again...haha


    gone,again in thin light
    of this sullen moon,i wail...
    "hollow out this path"
    show why i have to be ...me.
    transparent waves of sound
    i can not be heard .
    bent double on knees
    this burns, wounds ive hidden...
    to please..WHO..i ask .
    if not for all then myself alone.
    longing ,at time to alter outside,
    in....catch hold a life so
    fragile tempted to fail.......

    away for what,to be heard
    in depths of salted tears
    i wade alone , as it is to be.
    lashing sands that pour
    on tiptoes i breathe
    again i breathe.
    to please who if not all
    if not myself in life.
    then take the thread ,
    take this path,it drips
    bleeding to long......
    awake.now i see ......
    its done,cast off
    lost ,i peel away finding me........
    another life ...

    lovenpeace from saff

    sometimes removing yourself from all
    brings the best path to follow..
    what ever the need it will change
    all....thank you
     
  2. imherbert

    imherbert Member

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    Peace, love, and comfortable shoes.

    Thanks for the soul picture. Seems like some serious self-assessment maturing to self-awareness occurring there, if I'm getting your drift.
     
  3. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    for all who live..

    so time lashes its tongue
    of fate.not preoccupied
    in sin.this body worn
    thrills still come.coldly
    i dance in sands, longing
    to feel..something.
    now caress such skin, so
    smooth.depths ive
    seen and swam...{before}
    alone in waters unerved
    by life.tranquil rapids swept
    me along,along the shores
    of my chapters, within
    pages words will, faulter
    and fail me.. once again...
    so tender rays of this night,
    i moan..oh, i beg... to linger,
    in such silver moonlight....
    skin upon skin entangled,
    breathless movements..
    such delights...


    thank you
    lovenpeace from saff
    not sure here,just writing and thats it.....
     

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