Sweet 16 Runaway

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by european son, Mar 17, 2007.

  1. european son

    european son Member

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    Young girl with your hair up in a bun.

    Backpacking through the land all under the sun.
    You said your homelife was unsatisfying.
    While at home your mom and dad are crying.
    In New York city you met a thunderous man named Thor.
    Withen weeks he got you a job as a whore.
    You were a favorite of all the drunken men.
    Hooked on coke living in a crackden.
    You had enough,you wanted to get out.
    As Thor heard this he began to bawl and shout.
    Smacked you twice, looked like it hurt real good.
    Left some bruises like any good pimp would.
    Against his wishes you decided to run away.
    16 without a place to stay.
    Would go back home but afraid of the shame you felt
    So you made a nuece and decided to hang yourself.
    Your body found in the harbor by a boat
    Taped to your corpse was an obvious suicide note.
    It read "I hate it here and i dont want to stay."
    That's the life of a 16 year old runaway.
     
  2. Malapascua

    Malapascua Member

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    WOW, powerful and sad.
    I wish many "would-be" run-away teens could read this before they decide to head out on their own.
     
  3. WWKCD729

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    damn....strong...sad...beautiful
     
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