need help on title for my poem

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by iscreamchocolate, Aug 20, 2004.

  1. iscreamchocolate

    iscreamchocolate Senior Member

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    title help... please put down some titles... :p:p

    Rain showering down;
    Through my being.
    My heart in the mist to drown;
    Bone prisin ceiling.
    Purifying my soul,
    Present yourself to the rain.
    Cleaning out the hellhole
    In my bodies domain
    There it goes,
    Trickling through the bones.
    There is shows,
    Stiffled between the moans.
    Heart pregnant
    With the colorless spray of skys tears,
    Cool wistful current,
    All dryness clears.
     
  2. drewbee

    drewbee Member

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    Breakout
    The release
    Enlightenment
    The returning
    freedom
    Clensing

    dunno, maybe those can give you some ideas
     
  3. Tigerbeam

    Tigerbeam Member

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    love drop
    mist of life

    ... i think these would be good, unless i didnt get the poem
     
  4. Genesis

    Genesis Member

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    in silence we flow?

    riverbed souls?


    not the best i admit...but might help you on your path.
     
  5. sunflowerAlys

    sunflowerAlys Member

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    i think only you can name your poems and if you cant then so be it. i never title my poems on anything but impulse :)
     
  6. Genesis

    Genesis Member

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    and the rest of us should use numbers....



    i hate numbers




    but i recommend them on poems.....


    im not lazy:rolleyes:
     
  7. sunflowerAlys

    sunflowerAlys Member

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    hmmmmmm numbers..... i never use them but a concept...nice and distanced and impersonal and ....woooo i dont have a real title let your mind soar

    but i think in my case since i never actually complete a poem happily i'd have to use decimals... :S
     
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