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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by WolfLarsen, Mar 22, 2007.

  1. WolfLarsen

    WolfLarsen Member

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    A Poem that Drank the Planets Out of the Sky

    By
    Wolf Larsen



    As the world marches forward into world war three I write a poem, as the land opens its legs to the falling nuclear missiles I make love to you on a huge white page of loudness (the words touching and touching our nakedness like a roar), and we proudly hold up our baby to sacrifice for the approaching mushroom clouds and we smile and smile like shipwrecks at each other and the composers smile like hundreds of monsters sleeping on your tongue and the composers laugh like every fantastic nightmare you have ever touched, in contemporary baroque I unite six billion voices singing their own eulogy, on beautiful sunny days all the flowers are reciting the last words of the human race

    Copyright 2004 by Wolf Larsen
     
  2. Isil

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    Gee :eek:

    I love it.
     
  3. Therapoetry

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    I am diggin your simile and metaphor
     
  4. skyfire

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    very strong structure. the imagery was amazing. i really enjoyed this one
     
  5. WolfLarsen

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    Thank you Isil, Therapoetry, and Skyfire!

    Cheers!

    Wolf Larsen
     
  6. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    Top notch! I loved it.
     
  7. Strange Days

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    Great job, I loved it, too.
     
  8. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Very powerful, leaves me with a swirling implosive sorrow.
     
  9. WolfLarsen

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    Thank you Kitten, 100% Liberal, and Sylvan.

    And you're right Sylvan, all these wars unleashed by the rulers of the world are very disturbing. Because we still live in a world of nuclear weapon stockpiles (like the one held by the U.S.A.) the future of the Human Race is uncertain.

    Best wishes,

    Wolf L.
     
  10. dylanzeppelin

    dylanzeppelin daydream believer

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    wow. that has a lot of emotion. i could physically feel it the angst. amazing. =)
     
  11. Miss_Beatle

    Miss_Beatle Beatlemaniac

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    Wow, that's a really great poem! :)

    By the way - WOO! This is my 500th post! :)
     
  12. ronald Macdonald

    ronald Macdonald Banned

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    bwaaahahahahahaha ! its crap !
     

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