Mon Poesie...And all That Crap o.O

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Isil, Mar 23, 2007.

  1. Isil

    Isil Member

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    Well isnt this a hoot xD



    Following this hooting (o_O) are a great many (not really) poems for the pleasure of your squinty little eyes, fat heads and greasy ventricles.



    Mehehe...heh.



    Anyway...Ive never posted any of my writing onto the internet for the general public to see. You should feel...privledged.



    Now, my poetry is typically lost of any sort of meaning (not that poems have to have meanings...they dont). Though, when a poem that does have some meaning behind it (or a...hidden agenda :eek:) springs up, i'll try my best to explain it.



    Actually, I wont explain any of it o_O



    These first poems are from a past stage in my poetry. If I ever post all of my writing, im sure youd be able to recognize the progressions ive gone through and all that…And, while reading you may notice that some of the poems sound related or use many of the same words. This probably means I wrote the second poem immediately after the first, and so on. I’ll also go through “word crazes”, lol. I sometimes love a certain word so much, i’ll repeat it in everything I write.



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    Upon the eaves of molten earth

    Sinking placidly

    In a constant state

    Of slow realization

    ---

    There are tunnels within Ulurin

    Not seen by those who dwell

    Upon firm earth, in midst of wind

    Up there, they cannot tell



    There is a land in Ellorath

    Dark, yet warm and bright

    Encompassed by a silver bath

    Of selenite clean light

    ---

    Peaks among the clouds

    Whose sides are adorned

    With faces

    Turned into the wind,

    Their eaves,

    Being the depths of their eyes

    And brows,

    Sprout cypress trees



    Down below,

    Sleeping upon the riverbanks

    Are the pines

    Whose branches yawn out

    Over the little ripples

    In which minnows play

    And in the pines,

    Their curling trunks growing out

    Through the old moss

    And I wonder whats beyond

    The leaves



    Inspired by Whispering Pines in the Mountains, a painting by Li T'ang :eek: Some Chinese guy



    ---

    There is such light

    Golden on the tops of leaves

    And green beneath

    Belonging to trees who grow

    Out of the old creases

    Of stone peaks

    ---

    The stars were gilded with the Moon

    And the Moon sank into the Sun.

    Sweet Cosmic appurtenance

    ---

    A golden facade

    Of Cosmic Imperfections

    Colored with well-used paintbrushes

    Dated back to the birthing

    Of the trees

    ---

    I fear

    Sitting in lava

    And my eyes wishing to leave

    ---

    Theres something about the sky

    Reflective of Mind

    And thoughtful

    In sweet respite



    I sing for it

    Voices of placidity

    Ringing from the stars

    A girdle for the Moon

    ---

    I hear

    Song

    Simply that

    Trickling of a phosphorescent

    Endearment

    ---

    Asleep with the sound

    Of Faeries

    Sprinkling, sprightly so,

    New thoughts of colored

    Magnificence

    Upon a freshly painted

    Lawn

    ---

    Joyful sorrow sits with me

    In silent travail

    And in these moods

    Of repose

    I wonder

    And drift

    With waves of

    Remembrance

    And fade into somber solitude

    At reflective intervals

    Revealing to me that

    Which has been always

    So lucid

    ---

    Within a balcony of clouds

    Amidst waves, silver

    Flowing

    With webs,

    Music

    ---

    Sparks

    The ignition

    Of my incandescent

    Mindful passages

    Silver strings among the clouds

    Call

    Droplets

    Glowing spirits are the Rain

    Falling

    At each pluck

    ---

    Paint

    Your

    Canvas

    And shine

    In the halls

    Of great delusion

    ---

    Please

    Leave the sky with me

    Youve managed to retain the Sun,

    And all else

    So let me hold the sky



    I hate that one >.> It sounds like a battle for child custody.

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    Ive discovered

    In the wake of an early changing Moon,

    That which the earth

    Has known

    Since birth

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    Ok, maybe that was a bunch...

    Like I said, this is all from the past. Its still not that old…Maybe a few months, though what I write now is quite different :eek: I regard it as better than most of what I wrote in earlier periods, though I always think that when I read an old poem and compare it to a more recent one >.<



    Who wants more? xD
     
  2. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Thank you,
    these surging whisperings
    swirl with intense simplicity;

    sweet universal pearls...
    my tabula rasa cup
    fills with a mere drop.

    Instant endearment...
     
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