A Faint Memory (poem)

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by gratefulvegan, Mar 24, 2007.

  1. gratefulvegan

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    A Faint Memory

    -Jim



    A distant sphere of burning glow

    Rises through the morning mist

    To sit atop the barren hills

    Beyond the placid stretch of sea



    Snow flakes float in the passing breeze

    Colliding with the frozen soil

    To form a sheet of purest white

    Atop the span of tainted earth



    Nature sings its solemn song

    Through lifeless trees and faded figs

    As clouds of black enclose the scene

    Enveloping all former dreams



    Lightning floods the dormant sight

    In vivid bursts of blinding light

    And rivers form of crashing rain

    Dissolving all existent pain



    A wave of boundless strength persists

    Eroding this established bliss

    To form a mound of wreckage, which

    I stand upon to reminisce.
     
  2. Isil

    Isil Member

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    Gee...Thats some very good poetry xD

    I love it.
     
  3. sHIP of fools

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    Thanks for reading this.
     
  4. gratefulvegan

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    Sorry- I didn't realize that my brother's username was still logged in. Thanks a lot for taking the time to read this poem though.
     
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