The Cat

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Miss_Beatle, Mar 27, 2007.

  1. Miss_Beatle

    Miss_Beatle Beatlemaniac

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    I stumbed upon an old poem that a wrote when i was like 12. I remember watching my old cat from my bedroom window, and i just felt like writting a poem about her. It's not very good, and it's very short, but it was my first poem, and i figured i would post it just for fun :)

    THE CAT

    Twitching tail, with green eye glances.
    Alert and watchful, shes up, she pounches.
    Quietly, not seen or heard
    By her prey, the little bird.
    Hopping happily in the snow,
    Just outside the kitchen window.

    Yep there it is :) hehe told you it was short. But i'm proud of it, i was only about 12, and had no idea how to even begin to write poems.
     
  2. feralfey

    feralfey Member

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    That's actually not bad. In particular for a first poem, let alone at age twelve.
     
  3. Major Peacenik

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  4. Duck

    Duck quack. Lifetime Supporter

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    very nice :)
     
  5. Hendrix1993

    Hendrix1993 Member

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    Kelsey. Thats all I can think of. : p p p p p pp p
     
  6. Anastaulia

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    That's fabulous. You wouldn't even want to hear what my first poem sounded like. Yeesh.
     

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