Instant Messenger (Warning! Erotic story)

Author's notes: Unless you're familiar with japanese, I suggest you read the following before reading the story.

Aishite imasu = I love you
Genki desu ka = Are you well (Japanese greeting equivalent of "How do you do"
hai, genki desu yo = I am well
Hai = yes
Iie = no
Watashi wa ___ desu = I am ____
Baka = Idiot/Fool (Can be used as an insult, but may also be used with affection
Skebe = Erotic/Dirty-minded
Chin-chin taberu = Eat dick (Suck my dick)

AND FINALLY: THIS IS A WORK OF FICTION. Names, file names, and e-mail address are NOT REAL! So don't waste your time clicking on the e-mail address. And although I got this idea while IMing my fiance, we have never tried cyber sex before - not yet anyway

Ok that's all. I hope you will all enjoy reading this as much as I enjoyed writing it.


Instant Messenger


To: sexyjpgirl@hotmail.co.jp
Start Time: 9:13:36 PM; End Time: 10:52:32 PM

Rafael says: hi love!

Rafael says: genki desu ka?

Mineko says: Hai. Genki desu yo.

Mineko says: How about you? Genki?

Rafael says: Hai. Genki.

Rafael says: I'm just a little sad

Mineko says: Hmmm? Why?

Rafael says: You know why

Mineko says: Hai, I know. I miss you too.

Mineko says: But we'll see each other soon, right?

Mineko says: Just two more weeks.

Rafael says: Hai.

Rafael says: Mineko-chan, I can't wait to see you again!

Mineko says: Me too!


Waiting for Mineko to accept the file "Hello!" (112 Kb). Transfer time is less than 1 minute with a 28.8 modem. Please wait for a response or (Cmd+.) the file transfer.

Transfer of file "Hello!" has been accepted by Mineko. Starting transfer...

Transfer of "Hello!" is complete.

Mineko says: LOL! Baka!

Rafael says: Hai. Watashi wa baka desu.

Rafael says: Do you like it?

Mineko says: Hai, I like it very much.

Mineko says: You look good here. Very sexy. Did you take this after you took a shower?

Rafael says: Hai.

Mineko says: I like it very much.

Mineko says: but I wish you didn't wear the towel

Rafael says: LOL! Skebe desu!

Mineko says: Hai. Watashi wa skebe desu.

Rafael says: But it's not fair! I also want to see your sexy picture!

Mineko would like to send you the file "mykireipic" (94 Kb). Transfer time is less than 1 minute with a 28.8 modem. Do you want to (Ctrl+T) or (Ctrl+D) the invitation?

Transfer of file "mykireipic" from Mineko has been accepted. Starting transfer...

You have successfully received "mykireipic" from Mineko. Before opening this file, you may want to scan it with a virus-scanning program.


Rafael says: My love! You're so beautiful in this picture!

Mineko says: I'm glad you like it.

Rafael says: sooooo sexy... I want to...

Mineko says: You want to what?

Rafael says: you knooooooowwww.

Mineko says: Baka.

Rafael says: Iie. Skebe desu.

Mineko says: Hai, you are very dirty-minded.

Rafael says: you too! What were you thinking when you saw my picture?

Mineko says: hmm...you know

Rafael says: No, I don't know.

Mineko says: I was thinking of making love to you.

Rafael says: That's what I was thinking when I saw your picture.

Rafael says: My love I miss you so much! I miss your face, your voice, your lips, your tongue...

Mineko says: You miss my tongue? Lol

Rafael says: Hai. Your tongue. I want to kiss your lips and feel your tongue with mine.

Mineko says: Yes! Love, please kiss me like that!

Rafael says: Okay, but first I'm kissing your forehead, then your nose, then your lips...

Mineko says: Mmm...that feels good.

Rafael says: Now I'm sucking your lower lip and gently licking it... gentle...

Mineko says: I'm opening my mouth...oh please love!

Rafael says: I'm kissing you open-mouthed now, my tongue is wrestling with your tongue, I'm finding it hard to control myself.

Mineko says: Me too! I'm breathing fast now, my nipples are so hard.

Rafael says: Now I'm kissing your left ear, blowing and licking.

Mineko says: Oh yes! Moooooore!

Rafael says: Take your clothes off first.

Mineko says: hai. I'm taking my lingerie off - the one you gave me for Valentine's.

Rafael says: I'm taking my shirt off.

Mineko says: Now I'm taking my thong off...please love!

Rafael says: Please what?

Mineko says: please touch me...

Rafael says: ok. I'm embracing you and kissing you on your mouth, your ears, your neck...

Rafael says: my hands are caressing your breasts, squeezing gently.

Mineko says: ooohhh!

Rafael says: Now I'm lifting you in my arms and carrying you to your bed.

Mineko says: I'm getting wetter and wetter. you're watching me, looking at my body...

Rafael says: watching you play with your nipples.

Mineko says: you're taking off your pants and underwear. now you're on top of me, kissing my breasts, tickling my nipples with your rough beard. ohhh yes! Ahh!

Rafael says: Now I'm sucking your right nipple and pinching your left.

Mineko says: ummm!

Rafael says: your body is rising, arching up towards my mouth.

Mineko says: your teeth are scratching my nipple, I'm moaning loudly.

Rafael says: yes...

Mineko says: Lie down on your back.

Rafael says: Hai! I'm lying down, waiting for you..oh! My love, your tongue feels good on my ear.

Mineko says: I'm licking your ear and sucking on the lobe...now I'm kissing your neck...biting...sucking...

Rafael says: Ooohhh! Please love!

Mineko says: Please what?

Rafael says: MORE!

Mineko says: I'm kissing your chest, you're shaking.

Mineko says: I'm licking your right nipple, biting it...

Rafael says: uuummmmm! aaaahhh!

Mineko says: now I'm doing the same to your left while my hand is touching you down there... now what do you want?

Rafael says: chin-chin taberu!

Mineko says: I'm kissing my way down your body. now I'm licking your hard cock while playing with your balls

Rafael says: OMG! AAAhh!

Mineko says: good?

Rafael says: HAI!

Mineko says: Now your cock is inside my mouth and I'm sucking and licking...you're moaning very loud. thrusting your hips at me

Rafael says: No more! It's my turn...sit on my face love.

Mineko says: I'm sitting on your face, lowering my wet pussy on to your mouth...OOOHHHH!!! SO GOOOOOOOOOD! You're pushing your tongue into my hole...uhh...ahh...

Rafael says: YES! Now I'm drawing little circles with my tongue. my love you taste so good! I find your clitoris and now I'm sucking it gently making you scream...

Mineko says: OOOOHHH! AAAAHHH! AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH! MY LOVE! OOOOHHH...........I LOVE YOU! I LOVEYOUILOVEYOU!

Rafael says: What do you want now?

Mineko says: YOU!!! I WANT YOU INSIDE ME! I GET UP AND LOWER MYSELF ONTO YOUR COCK...AAAAAHHHHH...

Rafael says: OOOOHHHHH! My love you're so tight and wet! OOOHHHAAAAHHH!

Mineko says: Feels so goooooooddd! I'm moving up and down slowly...then faster...faster...

Rafael says: My hips are rising up to meet yours! my cock is moving fast and hard inside your tight, wet pussy making you scream, making both of us scream....AAAHHHH!

Mineko says: OOOOOHHH!

Mineko says: I'm getting off you...you know what I want!

Rafael says: Hai! You're on your hands and knees, I go behind you...

Rafael says: I'm pushing my cock inside you HARD!

Mineko says: OOOHHH! MY LOVE, I'M SO CLOSE, PLEASE DON'T WAIT...PLEASE...FUCK ME!

Rafael says: My hips are slamming against your ass, my cock is about to burst...FASTER! HARDER! OH GOD, I'M SO CLOSE TOOOOOOO!!!!

Mineko says: OOOOHHH!!! AAAAHHH!!!

Rafael says: I'M ABOUT TO CUM!

Mineko says: DO IT INSIDE ME! MAKE ME PREGNANT! CUM INSIDE OOHHH, OOOHHHH.....I'M CUMMMINNGGG... AAAAAAHAHAHHAHAHHHAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!!!!

Rafael says: I'M CUMMING TOOOOOOOHHHHOHMYGODOMYGODOHMYGAAHH!!! AAAHH!

Mineko says: aahh...I'm still shaking...

Rafael says: umm...ahh! uhh...emptying myself into you...

Mineko says: don't pull out yet.

Rafael says: I don't ever want to pull out.

Mineko says: I wish you were always inside me.

Rafael says: Aishite imasu...

Mineko says: I love you too...

 

Btw (to the moderator), since this is an erotic story and there are a lot of underage members in hipforums, if you feel this is better suited for the Love and Sex forums then please feel free to move it there.

Peace.

 

Musicero. I think that was exceptional. Not only did you get to the root of the emotion, but you also PUMPED a lot of words, thus bringing extra dimension, and neo-realism to your work. I will provide more critique later, but first I will have a cold shower to calm down Mr. Boner.

 

computer says "no"

why did they bother, I mean why not just look on the internet at some porn and crack one off over the monitor - also is it possible to type that fast with one hand???

great story if you like all that stuff, I prefer stories about champion the wonder horse and the avengers and heidi, and Emil and The detectives

BTW does your mom know you wrote that?? what would she say if she saw this??? and to think it wasnt long ago the you first started spitting and swearing , you should ditch your friends they are obviously a bad influence

 

Who let him off his fucking leash again?

 

go swallow a biro sideways

 

Sorry, I can't do the tricks that you do with your anus. If you beg me, I'll let you lick my balls instead.

 

"why did they bother, I mean why not just look on the internet at some porn and crack one off over the monitor - also is it possible to type that fast with one hand???" I don't know - like I said, I've never tried it before.

"great story if you like all that stuff, I prefer stories about champion the wonder horse and the avengers and heidi, and Emil and The detectives" To each his own

" BTW does your mom know you wrote that?? what would she say if she saw this??? and to think it wasnt long ago the you first started spitting and swearing , you should ditch your friends they are obviously a bad influence" ROFLMAO!! :lol:

 

ours is a rough draft of psrt 1 of an article we are writting together on cyberrelationships and is a true love story that began right here on these forums just a lil under a month ago.

the funny thing about cyberspace is, there really is no space, no sence of distance, all things are connected with very little seperation. its in this tiny fragment of space more dimension then area where this story takes place. However the real story is happening simultaniusly in 2 small darkened rooms in 2 vastly different countries 10,000 miles apart.

who ever knew a simple hi how are you to a stranger on a forum could lead to such a story as this, she was at work, not feeling so great. he came along & just offered to stay awhile and keep her company till she felt alittle better. they talked all day, really about nothing, but before they realized what was going on a powerful attraction begun. They agreed to meet again when she got home, & he waited anxiosly already feeling the seperation every minute she was gone. she never showed up that night, having fallen asleep. He woke up to her woozie smile wedsday, the spider venom making her dizzy, he promiced to stay with her until she was alright. They dove deeply into eachothers minds, hearts & spirits. The spider venom seemed a kind of truth syrum, & honnesty just errupted from them, every thought every feeling, was expressed explored and examined. In only 3 days they felt they knew eachother better then anyone ever knew them, in theyre lives. they were honnest with eachother about feeling something happening between them but were honnest about not being prepared to admitting it. (yes admitting that you cant admit that something thats happening is really happening.honnestly its confusing, but in the confusion was total honesty.)baring our souls, shedding masks. baring our bodies shedding our clothes. making love in cyberspace there was no seperation, no distance, nothing missing, that night she fell asleep by his side, he watched her throughout the night. somewhere in the connection between them thst night something changed by that next morning they were probably in love (i'f they hadn't been sincethe momment they met)

They talked all day, feeling so alone in the seconds disconnected through random reboots & technical problems beyond theyre control. they loved every second and revealed every secret, even every single random sexual encounter or flirtation was layed on the table.they knew wich freinds were safe to sleep nextto & which ones couldnt be in the same room with them without trying to get them to bed. they knew everything. and yes it was scary. they grew. they changed. they were not the same people who met just days before. they'd become something new. together. althpugh still they admitted they couldnt admit it, but they knew they wanted to at least spend the weekend together. Fate and technology had a different plan. shed arrived home that night, and cyberspace didnt exist, four hours or more of agony, trying to reach him in desperation, and he waited nervously staring, trying to distract himself from a growing longing. things got so bad she was pacing back & forth begging the gods of cyberspace to let her reach her love (was this her way of admitting to herself what we'd both known about eachother?) shes calling everyone she can think of to come get her to anywhere with a connection. finaly after 4 hours of seperation that felt like 4 years, they were together again at her freinds house. It was like heaven being reconnected again & in a flood of emotion they burst with incredible love. At this freinds house a party began, freinds and more freinds all around her, yet she sat to the side smilling like crazy at the 1 guy not physicaly there.they flirted they laughed they shared every possible story. and even in this crazy atmoshere with freinds all around shed find every opportunity for them to explore theyre passions in any momment they could be alone... and even momments when not quite alone, the passion, romance, desire & fire errupting uncontrollable..room to room theyd roam looking for momments alone, 4 days she spent away from home, surrounded by freinds but only wanting to be alone with the 1 person there she needed more then anything. and what is this need thing? whered that come from? and why is she so desperate to find a place to have sex with someone on a computer screen when someone shes slept with many times is there in the house & momments ago was rubbing her leg? and why did she just push him away? not ready to admit what they couldnt admit, but ready to admit that theyre thinking of admitting to the only thing they really did know. (funny how even in the most extremely honnest relationship, love is the scariest thing to admit) It hadnt even been a week yet and already he trusted her sleeping side by side with another man, & he knew that even though days before shed been very sexualy spontanuis, he knew that now shed turn anyone down, even though she said over and over that she couldnt promice she would, just knew shed want to.

After 4 days in her freinds house she felt the need to get home, arriving home to still no cyberspace connection she ressorted to hours on the phone, worn out batteries, overrun minutes, and again seperation. time dialiation expantion contraction, every second apart utter agony. again she tried connecting over & over till finaly a emotional rush never more beautiful word then connected. tears of joy and floods of oh my god i missed yous and i love you so much and me toos and they realized they admitted what they couldnt admit without realizing it.

 

The fact that you had to take a cold shower is by far the best compliment I've ever received for any written work of mine.

 

what i like about yours is it really feels like ,,,
yours really captured the realism of cybersex. well except the spelling was too damn good..
lol
i wasnt so sure bout the audience 4 the 1 we're workin on so didnt think would be so good to be explicit..lol & more a cyberromance cyberrelationsip cyberlove then cybererotica.. its funny tho as the story progresses some of the hottest of momments were when the passion & desire were so strong we're taking risks to be together when we're not alone. ..either her..or me.. it didnt matter when things got hot things got really hot really quickly & didnt matter who was around or even where we were..
lil scared we;ll get arressted someday..lol luckily we'll be spendin lotsa time out in the woods.always nice when the clothes can go flyin whenb theres nobody there to care
well even there we'll have another couple thre but theyre really like family anyway so wouldnt really matter...& the bus has a upstairs or will..


oh lil confused tho did u say..that ..thats your.. fiance or something right..but u havent tried cybering?

ours is a tru story.. started right here on these forums..& is absolutely the most incredibly incredible & wonderfuly wonderful & most amazingly amazing thing i've ever experienced.. so yea watchout for an updated more complete version commin up hmm sooner or later were not settin timelines just inspirin eachother like crazy

 

The characters are not me and my fiance, although they are based on us - well, a kinkier version of us anyway. We've never tried it, and i get the impression that she'd be very uncomfortable about the whole thing anyway (I know because I tried coaxing her into phone sex a couple of times and she said she was too shy). However, we have been IMing each other every night since she left for her country and that's how I got the idea for this story.

lol, yes, I have to agree with you about the spelling and I was a bit worried about that. I suppose it would have made it even more realistic, but ultimately I decided to go for reading ease over realism.

 

I liked your story! I was going to say something about the spelling and grammar, but then I remembered this was a draft Anyway, once it's been edited I'm sure it will be even better - but I already like it. And congratulations on your relationship! May the two of you grow together, falling deeper into each other, into LOVE.

 

just get your selves a couple webcams have a relationship the sex will just come naturaly.. we have a pretty wonderful sex life for people so far apart..lol but it sure is nice knowin she wont be so far away forever..
but have fun you 2

 

hee hee well when your inspired to write while wathing her sleep & ya write till sunrise ya dont spell so great thats the thing about us too is i think we write at our best when we write together and both inspire & participate in the writting process..fonny thing..i've written about watching her write..& even funnier then fonny is i can never spell right, & we just really compliment eachothers writting styles (if theyre not 1 in the same which sometimes seems to be)(except i tend to go on & on & she says so much with so few words)(see what i mean we work better when we work together?)

 

Thanks for the advice. I'll be seeing her in two weeks though. Sometimes the waiting is part of the fun. Knowing myself, I'll probably have a hard time keeping myself from ripping her clothes off and ravage her against a wall in front everyone when I finally see her again. *Sigh* God, I miss her.

 

haha lucky you only 2 weeks..
she was contemplating comming here umm wow in under a week? but sigh wont be here for a month.. and the hardest part is..i maybe without net soon so might not see her alot the last few weeks b4 she gets here..ahh its gonna be rough.. but i guess thats why i spend all night writtin bout her when i miss her..

but if u keep writtin but your girl like that when u miss her your just gonna have a really sticky keybouard..& i think its the sticky keyboards that cause all the misspellings

 

ROFLMAO!:lol:

I'll keep that in mind.

 

Nice story, I never got to the end of it, did she fake an orgasm?????

how could you tell ????


Just joking actually my real thoughts are that the format is one that you could adapt and with a little careful thought you could move away from the sex/love angle and get more mystery and seduction into it, maybe even a little bit of the dark side of the internet could creep in. - in that format, because its so disciplined like a play you could actually have fun and challenge yourself on how to really get some interest into a book sized plot rather than merely a few paragraphs or a short story

If you could perfect that formet but get away from simply writing a sex scene it could be of great interest.

 

The format was a good idea. It gave the written work a new angle, and was artistic. Musikero, try and do a few more of these. Not just sex though. Use all sorts of different themes and relationships. You have an energetic creative side, and a good sense of humor, so it's good that you are using it creatively.