Hey I just thought I would put one of my poems on here. Teenage Lust Studded jeans torn at seams, Teachers whisky to bring on dreams, How I pity I am wrong, Teenage lust goes on and on, Your heart so black it makes the night look shy, Peroxide blonde, Hair to dye, Am I right? I could be wrong, Teenage lust goes on and on, French kissing between the throngs, We sing drunken sings, Girls, A lot in black lace thongs, Teenage lust goes on and on, Drunken lairs between mates, Sti’s and hourly rates, Is it love coz I yearn to long, Teenage lust goes on and on, In the end when it’s all done, Teenage lust goes on and on.
Good work, but I have two questions; 1. in the line "French kissing between the throngs, We sing drunken sings, ....." Should this word be "songs"? 2. in the line "Drunken lairs between mates, Sti’s and hourly rates,........." Should "Sti's" be "STD's"?
