transient.dream

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by bobdylan08, Apr 15, 2007.

  1. bobdylan08

    bobdylan08 Member

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    transient.dream

    slowly fading

    like the golden flowers of Spring

    The Impotent Goddess

    who lays down her splendor

    and evaporates into the crystal sky.



    she sweetly surrenders the Golden Sun

    unto the gentle arms of the world

    and we experience Springs first rose

    gently.exfoliating her fragile form

    and liberating her divine beauty



    the benign butterfly gets entangled

    in the silky gossamer of Earth.

    so fervent and eager to escape./

    and experience her utopian pretense

    she shakes herself free.



    she flexes her wings for the first time

    and lets the gentle breeze

    carry her to her destination.
     
  2. dragonangelbiker

    dragonangelbiker Member

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    i love your way with words,keep on writing
     
  3. bobdylan08

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    Wandering lost and forsaken on the pale streets of Versailles

    In the earliest throes of sunlight

    The wind breathing low through the velvet breeze

    I felt Death’s gentle touch

    In the tranquil hour of this propulsive dawn

    As delicate as a raven’s wing

    As soothing as the quiet benevolence of an angel


    (He was waiting within the steel garden
    jaws clenched in anticipation
    to deviate me to the contented kingdom
    and my innumerable dreams.)




    Take me now

    I am ready.



    Free me

    From the prison with no bars

    Societal tendencies and civil bias

    Breaking my will
    to survive,
     
  4. bobdylan08

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    damn it. the poem had very different spacing than what it shows i posted.

    oh well.

    oh and thanks dragon angel biker
     

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