Another for Axl Rose

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by WoodstockChild, Feb 14, 2007.

  1. WoodstockChild

    WoodstockChild Intrepid Traveler!

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    I wrote it in guitar class. To Axl with love.

    I know you don't want to hear the same old thing you've heard a thousand times before.
    But still, I want to give you something... a bit of my time? A piece of my mind?
    Can I love you?
    Can I help to ease the pain?
    Can you heal me?
    Can you save me from myself?
    You're not as alone as you may feel
    And neither am I,
    Neither am I.
    I really don't want to tell you the same old thing you've heard a thousand times before.
    I just want to give you something... all of my love. Would that be enough?
    Can I hold you?
    Can I be inside your head?
    Will you tell me?
    I want to know and understand.
    You're not as alone as you may feel
    And neither am I,
    Neither am I.
    I want to love you
    I want to take away your pain.
    I want to heal you
    Someday I know you'll understand.
    We're not as alone as we may feel
    And that I know,
    That I know.
     
  2. 20th_centry_fox

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    i really really like it :)
     
  3. WoodstockChild

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  4. 20th_centry_fox

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    your welcome :)


    you should make more poems
     
  5. WoodstockChild

    WoodstockChild Intrepid Traveler!

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    I write a lot =]
    Like what you wrote there. I love John Lennon.
     
  6. Mr. Mojo Risin'

    Mr. Mojo Risin' Senior Member

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    Why would you write stuff like that to some as self-indulgent as freakin' Axl. The music isn't THAT good, either.
     
  7. 20th_centry_fox

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    uh ok that wasn't very nice

    and yeah, i know, jon lennon rocks! of course, i dont think i was alive when he died, but my parents said they cried!
     
  8. Mr. Mojo Risin'

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    I wasn't trying.
     
  9. WoodstockChild

    WoodstockChild Intrepid Traveler!

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    But I love Axl.
     
  10. dragonangelbiker

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    the poem was great.john lennon rocks.keep writing.i have been writing a long time and this is really good.
     
  11. WoodstockChild

    WoodstockChild Intrepid Traveler!

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    I hope I can play it for him someday. Then we can fall in love =]
     
  12. BraveSirRubin

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    Sweet Jesus...
     
  13. RoundMidnight

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    :jester: :jester:
    :party: :troll:

    Wow what a psycho.
     
  14. optitom

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    Go back into therapy, but this time stay. they have laws against 40 something year old men marrying 15 year old girls...lmao
     

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