poema

Discussion in 'Portuguese' started by thetruthisouthere, Mar 9, 2007.

  1. thetruthisouthere

    thetruthisouthere Member

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    Humano ser est fa? Esperan?a

    Eu ou? um sprite com ondul livid blonde
    "sofr est viv sem esperan?a."

    ela ri, mordente jog para tràs luz rosy playing anel em torno rosy
    como nÑs todo ca para baixo.

    um aplic mal axiom
    d ela equivocado id?ia
    extremidade est extremidade.
    esperan?a encontr um promet:
    nÑs poss nÜo continu funcionamento para fora,
    fur como este para sempre

    assim deix nos sa e motim enquanto que nÑs ainda t vida,
    deix nos cri algo bonito forgettable.

    I am not sure my sentence structure is correct, any cmments would be much appreciated.
     
  2. Ayesha

    Ayesha Member

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    Honey, I don't mean to put you off, but it's quite impossible to understand what you wrote... Many words are misspelled and grammar structures are not correct at all. Anyway, I know what it's like to write in foreign languages. You don't always get what you want... So, here's my proposal: Try it in english and I'll translate it for you.
    Don't give up on your poem :)
     
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