off the dam wall!!

i made this in the view of someone seeing me. this is the first poem i have writen.

wach' you dooen here. i thought you where good, pure,
tunneled in.
yet you are here, not there. why?
sitten on this wall. why?
do you need help?
i can help you.
o no wate i can not help you after all,
all i can tell you is to get of the damn wall!

 

Cool poem

 

thank you

 

Yeah, its interesting

 

how do you define interesting?

 

Interesting as in good, lol xD

 

well that is not the answer to my question but o'well

 

think deeper coooool it

 

ah ok?