Ljóð (Ljod)

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  1. Isil

    Isil Member

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    You'll
    Be
    Caressed

    I
    Descry
    Wanton
    Love

    Or is it
    Needed.
    I flow with you.
    Engorge and
    Enrapture
    Little untouched
    Willow spurs
    Unfolding within
    My own
    Skin and
    Your fingers
    Which connect
    To it

    I may
    Intercieve
    Recieve
    Your song
    Cordially
    With warmed
    Pink ears

    Take your
    Amenity
    Within me
    Likeable snugness

    Permittance

    This has done
    Volcanoes
    Well
    Galunggung
    You will be
    Song
    Supercells read
    Whispering lightly
    To my
    Own
    Sentience

    This
    Heliopause
    Is gracious
    To our threaded
    Bodies
    Machanations
    Of a sea
    And
    Forsaken sand-storm

    They emit
    Quaint
    Requests
    Hunt
    For admittance
    Into
    Old strains

    Please
    Make your journey
    With me

    There are bears here
    Gnawing trees
    The skins of
    Worn partisans

    I cant
    Help
    But hear it

    This has
    Transformed

    You have
    Eaten
    Orange
    Bee Ophrys

    They say this
    Billberry enthrallers

    I say
    You have eaten
    Orange
    Myrtle
    From the face of
    Mine chest
    And moonflowers
    You have asked
    To sit within
    Our glade

    You have been
    Heliotropic

    I have been
    Nought
     
  2. phoenix_indigo

    phoenix_indigo dreadfully real

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    i didn't get sex just the art of making truly passionate love. personally. obviously you wrote it ;) but that is what i got out of it. i love the imagery you are able to convey and my favourite bit is the concept of "threaded bodies".

    very nice.
     
  3. Isil

    Isil Member

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    Woot, passionate love...yes. True love.

    I've been sitting here trying to explain why I used certain words in the poem, but I cant >.< Im terrible at explaining things.

    Thankyou for reading it, though xD
     
  4. Isil

    Isil Member

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    Here are some more, for you nice little folk.

    The first few are rather old (but not that old) and...bad...I think. They were written while I was watching a show about wolves...heh.

    Well, not inexorably disgusting. Just...kinda bleh.

    o.o

    ---
    The snow, as the clouds
    Whose rains do make the silver
    Of Winter
    The clouds, as the snows

    The stars, as the snow
    Whose diamonds do glow in reminiscence
    Of the sky
    The snows, as the stars
    ---
    The mountains, like the trees
    With strong boughs and turrets
    Which kiss the sky
    And the trees, like the mountains
    With peaks and points
    Which catch the falling snows.
    ---
    I can see the world spinning round
    So that flashes of green, and blue
    Appear in my head
    With fanciful sounds, which
    Make my heart swoon
    Till trees take my stead
    ---
    The silver-starry wood nymph sings
    As a starren green moth
    Lit with Moon upon its wings
    And golden nectar betrothed

    (Bleh. Comeplete bleh.)
    ---
    The following poem-thingies are old, yet not so old as to be classified as the same "old" as the latter poem-thingies, which are also old but older.

    Old.

    The age matters. I dunno why o_O
    ---
    Eyes are due to be open
    So that they may see
    And simply-
    See

    Let us enjoy provinciality
    -
    I lie with him
    And not that which belongs to you

    Again
    Our eyes are due to excitement
    -
    Naivety is welcoming of strangers
    Estranged
    ---
    Ive again come into conflict
    In the midst of potent
    Change
    And again I attempt
    Certain
    Verdant
    Methods
    Of literary exhibitions

    (I was having a poetic mood-swing, lol. I'll explain it if ya ask about the meaning >.<)
    ---
    It seems that I am lost of most sincerity
    And
    This comes from certain mouths
    The overgrandiosity harkens
    Wanton action

    Though
    Allotropic occurences
    Are
    Favored
    Within
    Andromedas
    Greenlands and
    Silver meadows

    (Again with the mood-swings. The meaning of this one is kind of equal to the last. I write in bulk...lol...one poem after the other, so they often end up conveying the same idea in different ways ((if theres a meaning to the poem, that is))).
    ---
    Ive returned to you

    Rushing winds and
    Knotted roots
    Who pierce the earthen flesh
    Of forest floors
    Where birds will peck
    And dance
    Displaying limpidly
    Colours-sheen

    And small grey tributaries
    Soft flowing
    Eat gaily away the clay
    And dust
    Of old banks and reed gatherings

    Tall grasses may
    Fall within you
    And carry pollen spores
    Away to whales and
    Shouting gulls
    ---
    At the movement of my eye
    Your eye
    Blinks
    ---
    I wish to implode
    My
    Stomach
    With a red pen

    (Hehe...heh...o.o)
    ---
    I rest back
    Into
    Pillows
    And hope to regai
    Regain
    Sense
    Simply enough
    To feel once again
    The tendrils of morn.
    ---
    Why is there a vaccum cleaner attached to your neck?

    (Its poetry to me >:O Come on.)
    ---
    This is
    Grotesque!
    Love sleeps
    Sleeps
    Within
    Posthumous boundries
    Boundries
    Boundries!
    Olden and
    Found
    Across ashen
    Roads
    In
    Old houses
    Blue
    And
    Covered by rocks

    I wish to reply
    Indeed!
    In that love is
    To be explained
    For myself
    And yourself
    And (I cant make out this word...its sloppy)
    Self

    Know!

    (Thus marks my use of the exclamation mark in poetry, as well as the repetition of the same word a bunch of times o_O)
    ---
    Small
    Movements
    Clothed in
    Heron downing
    White

    Life veins
    Fall
    Happily
    Wooden bats
    Fly
    Hauntingly
    ---
    Step into
    Bales
    Of
    Stars
    And
    Yellowing ovals
    Trodden quite

    Sleep
    Undiscovered
    Cloth belittled
    Green and
    Silver
    Ripples
    Are attracted
    To
    Metal squared
    Ridges
    Which surround

    Small
    Nipples
    Pink (again, I cant read the word...it looks like facets)
    Are lapped at
    By
    Water
    ---
    You speak of
    Defiance
    As
    A
    Castigateable term

    After-monitored
    Hours
    Are not
    Able
    To be executed with
    In-monitored
    Dark recognition
    Which teaches
    Nothing
    ---
    I had you here
    Right there!
    I hadnt noticed

    (I think losing my retainer in the car inspired this...)
    ---
    This wall
    Recedes

    While hair is picked at
    Arrestingly

    A clothed
    Atecedent
    Of
    Introversion
    Comes the slaring
    Rivets of
    Wooden curvacing
    Astounding
    Mechanics
    Who utilize
    Spritely
    Palmy mixes
    The adages of nails
    The funnels of wrapped skin

    That has
    Been
    Exposed to radiate expansion bands
    Unnoticed
    ---
    I recognize that
    This disk
    Is her disk

    If I may
    Recognize
    That this disk
    Is her disc

    (My friend let me borrow an Invader Zim dvd a few days ago...I wrote about it yesterday in poem-thingie form xD)
    ---
    His eyes are closed
    Now
    And do not at all notice

    Caressing in tubs
    Where algae is quite thicker
    Upon on the highst high of a brim
    It is now sharply filled full
    As the trees swim anon

    (It doesnt seem finished.)
    ---

    There you go, my peoples.

    I suppose I posted to much o_O
     
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