Everything goes silent

as souls slip past ten nameless stones​

softened during growth​

he enables silver roots​

silent through his sadness ​

sorrow, worry, yes says she ​

everything goes silent ​

tender ravaged darkness​

sorrow, worry, yes says she ​

everything goes silent​

 

This is great. The repetition adds to it a lot. I like it a lot.

 

speak to me, we, please, of these 10 nameless stones, stones softened during growth...
I am happy to hear that tender ravaged darkness!

 

I like this poem! Great job

 

that's some heavy stuff.