microsoft martini...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by VanAstral, May 1, 2007.

  1. VanAstral

    VanAstral Member

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    more than a minute
    to learn how to post
    a new thread...

    only two olives remain
    very little vodka, plenty
    of vermouth, and gin's on
    the grocery list; don't know
    when I'll be out again...

    limewire
    wire lime wire...
    a poem on its own

    slowing the system
    five windows, word, realplayer;
    smilies on the right: a huge distraction
    unnecessary

    When did spell-check become a part of this?

    back in the day I...
    picked peppers, pimentos,
    called them capsicums
    what do I know?

    Close current tag?
    Close all tags?
    I'm getting old.

    Content
    though
    so...
    Woo!
     
  2. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    Haha I liked it a lot! The end made me smile.
     
  3. VanAstral

    VanAstral Member

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    KittenX, always a treat for m'tongue, Last Meal
    mmm'lovely... milk and wine, traitors attract... !

    if anyone feels cheated by the martini...
    I've picked apples too...
    (best job ever, apple-picking)

    from NPR...
    Apples
    by Grace Schulman...

    Rain hazes a street cart's green umbrella
    but not its apples, heaped in paper cartons,
    dry under cling film. The apple man,

    who shirrs his mouth as though eating tart fruit,
    exhibits four like racehorses at auction:
    Blacktwig, Holland, Crimson King, Salome.

    I tried one and its cold grain jolted memory:
    a hill where meager apples fell so bruised
    that locals wondered why we scooped them up,

    my friend and I, in matching navy blazers.
    One bite and I heard her laughter toll,
    free as school's out, her face flushed in late sun.

    I asked the apple merchant for another,
    jaunty as Cezanne's still-life reds and yellows,
    having more life than stillness, telling us,

    uncut, unpeeled, they are not for the feast
    but for themselves, and building strength to fly
    at any moment, leap from a skewed bowl,

    whirl in the air, and roll off a tilted table.
    Fruit-stand vendor, master of Northern Spies,
    let a loose apple teach me how to spin

    at random, burn in light and rave in shadows.
    Bring me a Winesap like the one Eve tasted,
    savored and shared, and asked for more.

    No fool, she knew that beauty strikes just once,
    hard, never in comfort. For that bitter fruit,
    tasting of earth and song, I'd risk exile.

    The air is bland here. I would forfeit mist
    for hail, put on a robe of dandelions,
    and run out, broken, to weep and curse — for joy.
     
  4. Miss_Beatle

    Miss_Beatle Beatlemaniac

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    Cool poem =]
    I really liked it!
     
  5. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Nice combination, great flow... all in all a very fun read.
    Ps: I like them apples too ;)
     
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