Is it just to humor us?

My friend Steven posted this on myspace!!! lolI liked it so here ya go!!!!!!!!!


i'm just thinking
can't stay on the same subject
mind racing....
talking was talking berver
wondering
gah...
why yes, i would gladly jump out in front of that car to stop your collision.
but i don't think i will
not now
i'm tired...
listen
what is there to say after a massacre
nothing, everybody's dead, never to say, never to want anything ever again
except the birds
but what do birds have to say
poe tee-weet?
hmm... do they cure you, or is it just to humor us before we die.
life
enless?
joyless?
fun?
loving?
hatred?
peace?
oh yay
death in war is caused by men
suicide a cause
disease, a reason
cancer, blooming like a flower in nature
but this leaves all the answers on the road
ready for everybody to see
so...
to kick you around
throw you
spit on you
not knowing
your gone
no longer thinking
or are you
i mean, you were thinking a minute ago
so whats to stop you from thinking still that minute ago
i mean yes, your train has come to a stop
to never think after that moment
to never know what is happening after then
but
wondering
the human mind
joyous
painful
chemical
dangerous
soo...
may i ask you
how much for the arm?

 

I like parts of it, but a lot of it's just emo bullshit.

 

yea he kinda is lol!! i just really like the ending

 

That's great Ivy!!!

 

not mine lol notice it says my friend steven off of myspace? lol lay off the weed maggy!

 

lol duh Ivy, I saw who you said wrote it.. I meant that it was great you posted it.

 

oh lol idk i like som of it lol

 

What is UP with you people on here lately? Seriously.

 

That's some crazy shit... I kinda question his sane meter, just a tad. :\

 

yea........ i think he is well on his way to a padded cell!!!l mao!!!

 

I thought it began kind of irreverent and free, but maybe your friend should edit it. whatever power it could potentially have is inconsistent, imo.