Dreams Of A Sorrow and hate

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by KTvamp, May 9, 2007.

  1. KTvamp

    KTvamp Member

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    the light that shows has gone away.
    for some i'm a girl with no life,
    but to moste i'm just a misunderstood girl.
    someone with love, but never shows it,
    harder to show who i am.
    Sometimes i feel like my world colaps
    in my dreams of sorrow and hate.

    The world seams so much darker now,
    the trees arn't has green as they where before,
    the loneleyness i feel with out you,
    is gone and wont be found.

    The world that keeps on moving,
    when my world threttins to stop,
    i cant feel the love that was once here,
    there lost in my dreams of sorrow and hate.

    the world seams so much dimmer now,
    the flowers dont smell as sweet,
    the love i once had for you is gone,
    and wont return in this life time.

    so as i run my way around this life,
    living it as if i where okay.
    the world i knew is gone,
    and wont return in my life time.

    The dreams of sorrow and hate that fill my soul,
    are harder to say then now,
    my love for you is gone,
    and will never, never returne
     
  2. divinessence7

    divinessence7 Member

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    very nice and heart-felt...
    sounds like you're a member of the Broken Hearts Club... I still have my membership card;)
     
  3. KTvamp

    KTvamp Member

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    saddly i am. XD and i'm glad you like it.







    you do like it right?
     
  4. The GuitarMann

    The GuitarMann Member

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    wow. full of feeling!!!
     
  5. KTvamp

    KTvamp Member

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    thanks... and it didn't even take me all that long to think of. then aan, i was in a depressed mood when i wrote it.
     
  6. Miss_Beatle

    Miss_Beatle Beatlemaniac

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    Wow. That's a great poem! Very well worded!
    Oh, and question, in your sig, which one's you?
     
  7. KTvamp

    KTvamp Member

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    oh in my sig i'm the blond one on the end. and i'm glad you like the poem. like i said... i guess i was very depressed when i wrote it.
     
  8. myself

    myself just me

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    Very nice and full of emotion.
     
  9. KTvamp

    KTvamp Member

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    well thank you.
     

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