The Cure is the one you Love

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by maryjanegirl_2005, Sep 26, 2004.

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  1. maryjanegirl_2005

    maryjanegirl_2005 Controlled Chaos

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    have you ever lost someone
    that you've loved
    it doesn't matter how
    all you can do is cry
    and wonder why

    you cant help who you fall in love with
    it's just one of those things
    and you cant help your feelings
    and they will never go away

    just cry
    cry for the one you've loved
    then lost
    i know how you feel...

    it broke my heart to know
    that we could never be
    it broke it even worse
    to let it be
    ohh

    please release me from not knowing
    where our love is going
    will it grow
    or will it die
    all i can do is cry
    because if your broken hearted
    nothing cures it better then the one you love
     
  2. beautifulhippie2

    beautifulhippie2 TyeDyeChicka!

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    That is a very touching poem Tippy! I wanna cry!
     
  3. Justagrrl420

    Justagrrl420 Member

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    *sigh* I know that feeling all too well.. I liked it. Thanks for sharing
     
  4. Miss_Beatle

    Miss_Beatle Beatlemaniac

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    I liked it! And god it's so realistic. Good job :)
     
  5. MagicFlyingSaucer

    MagicFlyingSaucer Member

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    Lovely! And very very true..
     
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    janesaddiction Member

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  7. Forget me not

    Forget me not Member

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    Loved it. So true!
     
  8. myself

    myself just me

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