another poem

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by DefyxGravity13, May 17, 2007.

  1. DefyxGravity13

    DefyxGravity13 Member

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    opinions?

    **MY DEEPEST SECRET**

    Whenever I am with you
    you always make me smile.
    I'd do anything to hold you
    I'd even walk a mile.

    I know it's him that I should love,
    The one who'll love me too.
    But everytime I kiss him
    I wish that he was you.

    I know I shouldn't want
    All these things I do.
    And I've tried so hard to stop it
    But he's not as good as you.

    I know that I should end it
    It'll hurt him deep inside
    And I know that I should tell him
    But then he'll know I lied.

    I know that all of those "I love you" 's
    The ones that I returned
    They were only meant for you
    But he's the one I burned.
     
  2. The GuitarMann

    The GuitarMann Member

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    man. the truth of love is pain and confusion. i fell like you captured that. sorry about your situation. keep writing
     

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