To Feel

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by myself, May 18, 2007.

  1. myself

    myself just me

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    Lonely, wandering among those who had fallen in love
    Among those who were feeling both good and bad, both calm and mad
    He realized he was frozen
    Nothing could affect him, not even happiness
    He could feel nothing except for emptiness
    No more restlessness
    No more jealousy, no more hate
    He was dead, though physically living
    Trying desperately to throw away his emotional armour
    To live life once again with so much ardour
    Ten years were supposed to pass
    Till this curse would fade away
    To live once more there was a price to pay
    To get through both joy and pain
    To walk under both bright sunshine and heavy rain
    Never to kill the pain.


    LOVE LIFE, EVEN THE BAD PARTS. TO FEEL SOMETHING IS BETTER THAN TO FEEL NOTHING AT ALL.
     
  2. The GuitarMann

    The GuitarMann Member

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    sounds sad. like a person gone away. i like it. what does ardour mean???
     
  3. kidder

    kidder Member

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    Yet, where would we be without our "emotional armour"? It is properly our "curse." Intriguing effort!
     
  4. Miss_Beatle

    Miss_Beatle Beatlemaniac

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    Cool poem :)
     
  5. myself

    myself just me

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    thanks everyone :)
     
  6. thcinfectedhair

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    fuck...this dude sounds like me man..you almost struck me a tear
     
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