Here a new discounted item trying to clear out some old stock also willing to trade. http://www.etsy.com/view_listing.php?listing_id=6008829
I can't really see the picture all that well, because it is quite blurry. can I make a suggestion that you change the photos and maybe take them outside so people can see it better. Pictures really sell an item and if they are blurry no one will look. try taking a picture of it on someone or maybe on a mannequin outiside in sunny light. If you really want to get serious about selling on Etsy, taking good pictures is key. Keep up the good work!
Also, I read your description.... don't talk down about your products, even if there is the slightest imperfection. Make it interesting and lively. Talk about why someone would want it and not about why you charge so little. Broadcloth is not a bad thing. If it took you time to make it and it is made well, charge what it is worth.