It was 1:10

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by brertom, May 30, 2007.

  1. brertom

    brertom Member

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    Drinking some juice

    After another long day.

    I sat there pondering

    Maybe some girl

    Is sitting at home

    Wondering where I am.

    It was 1:10

    And I'm home

    Before the rest of them.

    They're stuck in a prison

    Filled with manipulation

    Day in, day out.

    My dog laid beside me

    Dreaming about

    ferociously playing with me.

    The air was so warm

    And covered with mist.

    The sun seeped through

    My mother's perfectly

    Picked out shades.

    Dark clouds hid

    In the distance away

    From the summer's

    Lazy afternoon.

    The freshly cut grass

    Glistened straight into

    our minty green room.

    The T.V. was on but

    Only for background noise.

    The cicada's sang their

    Songs as a dragonfly

    Buzzed on by.
     
  2. SweetMarie

    SweetMarie Member

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    I really liked this, I could actually feel the day.
     
  3. brertom

    brertom Member

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    thanks fellow chicagoan!
     

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