I discovered that, sometimes, Letting go of dreams and letting Life takes you where it meanders Opens doors to naked freedom: For when I strayed from the promise of A cave of diamonds and veins of pure gold I failed in my wondering pursuit Only to stumble across the starry sky. ************** From personal experience I just realised, this poem is pretty daoist...
I like it a lot It's so... it's brief but it says what needed to be said The cave of diamonds/veins of pure gold part - I liked that a lot. Plus, I'm partial to just about anyone who can fit the word "meander" into a piece.
