A self portrait I did last night.

Discussion in 'Art' started by moonlightdelerium, Jun 12, 2007.

  1. moonlightdelerium

    moonlightdelerium Senior Member

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    It definitely needs some touch ups, but I'll get on that later tonight. This is in oils.
     
  2. Magical Fire Lady

    Magical Fire Lady Senior Member

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    Cool.. the face doesn't really look finished to me but I dig how its coming along
     
  3. moonlightdelerium

    moonlightdelerium Senior Member

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    It needs touch ups, I was thinking of adding colour to the face, but I don't think I will. I was kind of going for the unfinished look, maybe I'll do another one. Je ne sais pas.
     
  4. White Scorpion

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    I love art like this, because it shows the power of the imagination of the artist. First, you haven't used bold colours, and the way you've set yourself at the bottom right corner suggests an artist who likes to blend in with their surrounding. At the same time you have broad horizons, as your image is not finite.

    You have transpired a gory image without making it immediately apparent. I look at your picture and it tells me a whole story. It is not the best self-portrait I've seen, but it is completely interesting. It speaks volumes.

    A young lady in black, with a head shaped like a lemon, is being eaten by black maggots. The black maggots are getting eaten by the green maggots and they are seperated by a guitar, which is holding back the big red maggots who want to eat everything.

    It's about you thinking of changing your hair colour, isn't it?
     
  5. Duck

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    I love your work.
     
  6. moonlightdelerium

    moonlightdelerium Senior Member

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    Your comments are the most interesting I've ever recieved. Thanks for your input.
     
  7. Duck

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    pssht
    mine was way better, his was so vague and undetailed :tongue:
     
  8. soaringeagle

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    ohh personaly i think it is finnished it captures something of your mood, & where your at in life,
    it says i am more then i apear
     
  9. moonlightdelerium

    moonlightdelerium Senior Member

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    Just between you and me, I was just saying that to be nice.
     
  10. Duck

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    dawh :D
     
  11. White Scorpion

    White Scorpion 4umotographer

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    I have a funny way of seeing things. It is a fine painting. It is vibrant and cheerful. I like it for its originality, and the artist's humour.
     
  12. HomicidalMercury

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    I like it how it is. Don't ask me why - I just like it.
     
  13. TheMistress

    TheMistress Senior Member

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    I find it very interesting how you used oils as if it was acrylic. Do you normally paint in oils in this way or was a conscious decision? I have a problem with the brown line that is dividing the portrait from the top of the painting. I think it would look more uniform as a composition if you took out the brown line and made the green and red mingle a little. DId you do the portrait from a photograph?
     
  14. moonlightdelerium

    moonlightdelerium Senior Member

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    Actually, it was a completely conscious decision to do the oils as if I were painting with acrylics. Initially, I had intended on blending them in an oil type fashion but I thought it bring the colours out more if I left them unblended. I'm going to add more to them. I still can't decide if I should leave the face black and white or if I should add some pink hues to it, to go with the roses on top. And, yes, I got the idea from a photograph.
     
  15. soaringeagle

    soaringeagle Senior Member

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    leave the face as is its stark contrast gives it its character
     
  16. White Scorpion

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    I think the face is lovely. The variance in eyebrow dimension provides a composite discussion point.
     
  17. ronald Macdonald

    ronald Macdonald Banned

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    Its great but the eyebrow on our left should be thinner also it just needs one small line to make the shaddow somewhere near the eye to mark where the nose begins - also a

    theres something wrong on the rightside of the face theres a detail missing thats small

    other than that its great - well done
     
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