My Sacrifice

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by blackheartbitch, Jun 17, 2007.

  1. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    A sacrifice burnt on the stake
    offered to try and save
    my blackened heart. Trying to save
    the tears and blood
    that drip from my wicked soul;
    don't dehydrate yourself
    for the love of someone
    who doesn't love you back.

    Steal me away
    break my already bleeding soul
    I taste the saltyness
    of blood mixed with tears
    upon my chaped lips...
    it tastes like the honey for my soul.

    A fake expression of happiness escapes
    my sultery heart to make you think everything's okay
    but I'm really invisible to you.
    Whether you beleive it or not
    we've grown so far apart
    its killing me.

    A sacrifice to steal
    back my sanity from you
    to pull me in close
    and kiss me oh angel of death
    make me my own sacrifice
    from this insane life i can't control.

    Make me the sacrifice made to save
    our already dieing passion
    to save our partening souls
    from more distance than is good
    for my health.

    Make me a sacrifice to save myself.
     
  2. cephlasparks

    cephlasparks Member

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    inevitability...
     
  3. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    have i seen this one before from u?? or is it new?..either way i like it hehehe, <3 a majorly depressinnng 1 but good
     
  4. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    although it could be improved, a bit...
     
  5. WoodRat

    WoodRat Banned

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    All I can say is it definately wrought me an erection.

    AKA well done!
     

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