Serotonin Drop

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by brertom, Jun 18, 2007.

  1. brertom

    brertom Member

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    I was somewhere between London

    And Chicago

    When I could feel the prozac running out

    I had just finished reading “Pulp”

    And I think Bukowski was right

    I was born to die

    Born to wait

    And born to lie

    Its been about 48 hours with barely any food

    And absolutely no sleep

    The screen read 1641 miles to destination

    I am being cooped up with all of these restless

    Assholes

    Before the flight everyone was waiting in line

    At least 45 minutes

    People shoved and nudged

    As you looked in their eyes everyone was ready to

    Kill

    I could have done without all of them

    Now it is not even 6 in the morning

    Jetlagged, ready to kill,

    Ready to die

    Heathrow Airport is a terrible place
     
  2. White Scorpion

    White Scorpion 4umotographer

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    What does poetry mean to you?
     
  3. brertom

    brertom Member

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    expression of thoughts certain activities that have impacted you
     
  4. TurquoiseRose

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    Was the run-on effect purposeful, because I liked it if it was. Made me think of constant travel?? Thoughts?? I dunno.
     
  5. Makimono402

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    Heathrow IS a terrible place. That flight sucks, especially as a red eye.
     
  6. White Scorpion

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    I agree. Gatwick is slightly better, and the staff are nicer. Has anyone flown from Stanstead at all? It's not very busy.
     

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