I hope i don't offend to many hippies

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by brertom, Jun 18, 2007.

  1. brertom

    brertom Member

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    Soft as Me




    These people are soft.

    They are as soft as me.

    These people are rebels.

    Rebels for peace.

    These people read

    and do drugs.

    These people think.

    These people evaluate.

    These people do not take the easy way out.

    These people are proud.

    These people are outcasts.

    These people have sex

    and read.

    These people listen to music

    that makes them feel good.

    These people do not fight.

    These people are soft,

    soft as me.

    These people have sculpted me.

    These people correct me.

    These are the people

    that formed me.

    This is why

    I am.




    These people are not my parents.

    These people have inflated egos.

    These people are not hardworking.

    These people are soft.

    Almost as soft as me.

    These people think to much.

    These people over analyze.

    These people are as bad

    as their enemies.

    These people are mad.

    These are the people that have

    formed me.

    This is why

    I am.
     
  2. brertom

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    what do you mean by that comrade?
     
  3. brertom

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    Im 16, being juvenille is what I am ha. gotta be myself
     

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