Dreams in a rainbow

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by hippychrome, Sep 22, 2006.

  1. hippychrome

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    Dreams in a rainbow,

    hair blowing in the wind,

    a dream being turns to show her face,

    the eyes make contact with mine and a power entwines.

    My heart and soul raced with excitement,
    the beauty I see is like no other.

    I fear to blink incase she disappears

    but a whisper from her mind and soul tells me that is not so.

    I blinked and our hearts met in the spiritual and astral planes,

    soft gentle lips met for a single kiss and our long hair mixed...

    The rainbow glows brighter.


    Just something that came to me, its short I know lol.

     
  2. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Powerful and gentle, a very bright and responsive poem that glows with togetherness.
    I found it very peaceful and expansive.
     
  3. hippychrome

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    Thankyou :). Usually I do longer poetry and usually more depressing. But I think I'd like a lighter side to come out again. It just came out so I wrote it down lol.
     
  4. hippychrome

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    What happened to all my confidence?
     
  5. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Very good work. I really enjoyed reading that poem.

    Peace and love
     
  6. hippychrome

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    Thankyou :)
     
  7. hippychrome

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    I like some of your poetry too that I have read so far by the way.
     
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    I miss a friend :(
     
  10. myself

    myself just me

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    nice poem.
     
  11. hippychrome

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    Thankyou, I'm glad you liked it mermaid :)
     
  12. hippychrome

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    1 missed, I still dream. Oh well lol. It just came to me.
     
  13. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    fun poem =)
     
  14. Gothika

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    nice work, well done =)
     
  15. hippychrome

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    Thankyou both :)
     

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