depression and anger

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Freakymetalchik, Jun 22, 2007.

  1. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    so lonely in your desperation
    standing in your solitary hell
    so slowly are you tortured tonight
    your mind reeling as you take it in
    surely Death has come to kill you
    eating your heart as it butchers your soul
    you die alone now in your heartbroken fury
    posing as an innocent martyr you fall

    a silver tear slips down your face
    an expression of all your wanting
    as you perish in the eternal fires you weep
    hoping for the second chance
    praying for the second chance
    a second chance you will never have

    with your dying breath you scream
    i smile as i watch you fade away into dark
    you who have ripped out my heart and
    put it on a stick to laugh at
    you die tonight
    as i smile.
     
  2. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    its gory i like it
     
  3. myself

    myself just me

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    I'm into dark poetry lately, yours is very inspiring.
     
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